HOW I DID ON LAST WEEK’S GOALS
Finish editing the scenes that happen after the softball game
It took me four days, but I got it done!
Start working on the scenes leading up to the park
Done, although the scenes didn’t end up happening at the park. Funny how things change like that.
MY GOALS FOR THIS WEEK
Revise the scene where Jules and Jesse fight in the hall
Write/revise scenes up to (and including) her hanging out at Roller’s with her brother and his friends.
A FAVORITE LINE FROM MY STORY OR ONE WORD/PHRASE THAT SUMS UP WHAT I WROTE/REVISED
“Or a little distracted?” Brit suggested, as we walked toward the dugout. “Forget about Jesse and concentrate on the game.”
THE BIGGEST CHALLENGE I FACED THIS WEEK
I was stuck on the after-softball scene for a few days because what happens affects pretty much the rest of the story and I needed to make sure it felt “right” before I moved on.
SOMETHING I LOVE ABOUT MY WiP
That Jules’ friends call her out on her BS. No one more than Brit.